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Jan 18 2008, 11:57 AM EST by
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Remember, I will be adding things to my page...NOT just polls.
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snow boarding
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Jan 11 2008, 8:42 AM EST by
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Thread started: Dec 3 2007, 8:21 AM EST
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A good start - don't forget to use spell check!
How long have you been snowboarding? Where do you go?
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Jan 11 2008, 8:42 AM EST
Well i have been trying to snowboarding since i was 4 and i really sucked at it. Were i go to snowboard is right infront of my house theres a big hill and i snowboard with my brother & my cusins and somtimes my friends too.
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DUB CARS
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Dec 13 2007, 12:25 PM EST by
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Hi Brandon,
Can you write some more to explain what a dub car is? I do not know what it is - you are teaching me something new!
Please check the assignment outline to make sure you have 50 points worth of activities done. So far you have chosen 25 points of activities.
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hockey
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Dec 13 2007, 12:24 PM EST by
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Hi Tyler,
Keep working on your assignments! Check to make sure you have chosen 50 points worth of activities.
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tiburon
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Dec 13 2007, 12:22 PM EST by
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Hi Alex,
Keep up the good work. Please check the assignment outline to make sure you have 50 points worth of assignments! So far you have chosen activities for 25 points.
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Final editing
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Travel and Geography
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Dec 13 2007, 12:21 PM EST by
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Hi Jeremy - we need to make a subpage for your glossary. Also, I'd like you to format the glossary so that it is easy for the reader to see a difference between a vocabulary word and the definition.
Have you finished the slide show?
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Pictures!
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ice cream
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Dec 13 2007, 12:19 PM EST by
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HI Daisy,
Find some pictures of ice cream to add to your page.
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snow boarding
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Dec 13 2007, 12:18 PM EST by
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Hi Jen - I'm glad to see that you have edited your paragraph! Please check the assignment outline to make sure you do 50 points worth of activities!
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In your own words
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theshak
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Dec 13 2007, 12:16 PM EST by
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Hi Shak - You will need to rewrite your first paragraph in your own words.
Check the assignment outline to make sure you have 50 points worth of marks!
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A great start!
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sweetbaby
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Dec 13 2007, 12:14 PM EST by
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Hi Tasha,
This is a great start! We still need to put your slide show on the page. Also, you need to look at the assignment outline to make sure you have 50 points!
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Dec 13 2007, 12:10 PM EST by
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Hi Troy - please check the assignment outline and make sure you complete 50 points worth of activities!
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Oraganizing
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Dec 13 2007, 12:08 PM EST by
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Hi Allison,
I love the poem you wrote!
I'd like you to organize your information a bit more on the page. For example, above your timeline you can put a title telling what we are about to read.
Also, check to make sure you have 50 points worth of assignments done.
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conner's page
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Dec 13 2007, 12:06 PM EST by
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Hi Conner,
You need to add more writing to this webpage.
Describe what is happening in the video - why do you like this one? Are they certain tricks that they do that are very difficullt?
Also, check the assignment outline and see what else you can do to come up with your 50 points.
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Travel and Geography
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Dec 6 2007, 11:55 AM EST by
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why do like geogerthy
Ilke you map of the woulrd
why dont you show me the maps of world
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Comments for Jeremy
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Travel and Geography
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Dec 3 2007, 8:11 PM EST by
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Holy Moly Jeremy this list is getting quite hefty! I'm glad to see you added links. I also like that your list is quite international...though I am noticing it is a bit USA heavy. Try to mix it up if you can.
Maybe you can add a line or two about how you chose the dates you did.
Also, I'd like you to resize the picture. It stretches out the wiki page and makes us have to scroll back and forth. Try to make it fit on the screen.
Good work so far!
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Dec 3 2007, 8:11 PM EST
You've hit a very important date Jeremy. Many people feel that the world has shifted dramatically since the fall of the Berlin Wall.
You may be interested in this article by Thomas Friedman called, "It's a flat world, after all."
http://www.nytimes.com/2005/04/03/magazine/03DOMINANCE.html?pagewanted=3&_r=1&oref=slogin
On page 3 he starts talking about a series of events that changed the world, starting with the fall of the Berlin wall.
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hockey
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Dec 3 2007, 8:39 AM EST by
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Tyler, When you read this message call me over and we can make sure you are organized to start working on this!
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tiburon
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Dec 3 2007, 8:38 AM EST by
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I'm glad to see you got started Alex. Did your mom tell you she saw your webpage?
I'd like you to add some more information about the Tiburon. All cars have 4 wheels and doors and an engine...what makes this one different?
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ice cream
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Dec 3 2007, 8:31 AM EST by
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Wow - look at all of the ice cream flavours!
Now you need to find pictures of ice cream and make a slide show. Jeremy can help you.
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Dec 3 2007, 8:29 AM EST by
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I like how this is all in your own words Troy. This is a great start.
Please remember to use the spellcheck button when you edit!
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johnnycash the man in black
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Dec 3 2007, 8:28 AM EST by
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A great start Allison! Let's sit together and organize some of the info you have here. The timeline seems to be stuck to the descriptive paragraph. Also, you may want to change the name of your page to Johnny Cash so people know what it is about!
Oh - and don't forget to spellcheck!
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